It’s not the just real world changing

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Mobile phones should be as important in our fictional world as they are in the real world.
Mobile phones should be as important in our fictional world as they are in the real world.

I’ve been re-reading a few of my favourite old books. Well – not so old. Some were written in the 80s and 90s… and I was immediately struck by how much technology has changed the world. In particular an author’s world.

I’m not just talking about how much time we spend on Twitter and Facebook and Pinterest and all the other social media sites.

Nor about our obsessive checking of our chart rankings at the on-line retailers.

I’m talking about what we write.

In my bottom drawer is a book called Merchant Prince. It was the second book I wrote and has never been published (for very good reason – it was pretty awful). I mention it because a major plot device was the hero racing to the airport to try to stop the heroine hopping on a plane. There was tension because we didn’t know if he would make it or not. Today – that isn’t a valid plot point, because he’d simply phone her from the car. Or text her.

The heroine of the book I am writing now is a long way from home and terribly homesick. But with the free video calls on Skype or Facetime or whatever, she’s able to talk to her mother and her friends face-to-face whenever she wants. She’s still homesick – but it’s not as important or difficult as it might once have been.

Human relationships – and novels about them – are all about communication. Conflict, tension and plots come about when there is lack of communication – or miscommunication.

The old plot point of not knowing the man you just met is a millionaire or a movie star or married or whatever is made redundant by the knowledge that as soon as our heroine gets a moment, she will google him or search for him on Twitter. There’s so much out there about each of us, the mystery is much harder to create. And she doesn’t even have to go home to do it – she can do it on her phone while he is in the men’s room.

Social media has put so much personal information at our fingertips.. it's hard to keep the mystery.
Social media has put so much personal information at our fingertips.. it’s hard to keep the mystery.

A few books I have read lately get around some of these issues by having our heroine’s phone battery run flat at the crucial moment. I know it happens – but I think that’s cheating. So is the ‘I left it at home’ solution (although I leave mine at home all the time).

I write books set on the Australian outback – one of the many places in the world where you can have your fully charged phone and not be able to make a call due to lack of coverage. This works up until you enter a town which will have both phone and internet service.

What I think all this has forced us to do, as writers, is come up with new ways of creating conflict and mis-communication. I sometimes try to use the technology – there can be things on the internet to mislead our characters. There could be internet trolls stalking someone. Have an embarrassing and misleading photo put online. Maybe have someone’s account hacked.

Or – I can simply come up with other plot points and conflicts where the technology doesn’t impact… but the most important thing is not to ignore it.

Writers of historical novels have to work at getting the period details correct. Writers of contemporary novels have to work at getting their time correct too – and it’s harder for us. Readers may not notice a small inaccuracy in a novel set in 1700 as easily as they will an inaccuracy in a contemporary novel.

When I read a book where the character doesn’t simply pick up a mobile or a tablet and check something – it loses me.

Although novels are fantasy –they still have to be REAL.

 

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10 responses to “It’s not the just real world changing”

  1. Katherine Garbera avatar

    Janet; This is so true. I write contemporary romance and I have found that technology gives an added element to the books. And I love it.

    Katherine

    1. Janet avatar

      Me too Katherine. Of course, I am a bit of a geek girl, but I love the challenge of finding new plot devices that will resonate with readers.

  2. Jean Fullerton avatar

    Very true, Janet, technology can not only scupper well-planed plots. Thankfully, if’s not something us historical writers have to worry about too much.

    1. Janet avatar

      True Jean – I don’t imagine your characters use mobile phones often:-)
      I admire historical writers so much for the research that you do – and the accuracy that you achieve. I’m not sure I could to that.

  3. Chanpreet avatar

    This is an amazing post Janet! I’ve never thought about how much harder it mu st be to write contemporary novels. Technology plays such a huge role in our lives and I’ve never given much thought of it in regards to books.

    1. Janet avatar

      Hi Chanpreet…
      It’s not just the technology. It’s locations and travel times and prices and – well- everything. I would hate a reader to be pulled out of my story because I got something wrong. That’s why Coorah Creek is a fictional town – then it can be anything I want it to be and no-one can say I’ve put the airport, or a building or road in the wrong place.

  4. Angela Britnell avatar

    It does make things interesting – Cornwall is a useful setting from the tech point of view as phone/internet coverage isn’t always reliable although as you say it’s not a good idea to use that ‘out’ too often!

    1. Janet avatar

      I like remote places as settings generally Angela. I think our emotions are much closer to the surface when we are not wearing the shields that we tend to have in crowded and busy places.

  5. Anne Harvey avatar

    I’ve just read a book written in 2002 set in Italy and the lack of mobiles/ smart phones showed in the heroine having to ask to use someone’s desktop computer to send an email and walk down into the nearby village to phone someone. It struck me straight away just how much the digital world has changed in just over ten years.

    1. Janet avatar

      That sounds totally right for 2002, Anne – I certainly didn’t have a smart phone then. The rate of change in recent years has been staggering. I have to wonder what the next ten years will bring…